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    长寿是好是坏?对个人和社会都有什么影响?雅思大作文真题解析

    摘要  

     Gini老师小课堂

     


    在英国作家琳达·格拉顿与安德鲁·斯科特合著的《百岁人生》一书中,开篇即提出了一个迫切的疑问:“如果我们都将活到100岁,我们的生活和工作要怎么办?”

     

    这是已经步入“长寿时代” 的人们都应该思考的问题。长寿是好是坏,对个人和社会产生什么问题?这些问题如何解决?

    2022年6月11日雅思大作文就考了这一话题,Gini老师带大家一起来探讨下~

     

    Today many people live longer after retiring from work. What problems does this cause for individuals and society? What can be done to solve these problems?

     

     

     

    作文题目

     

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    审 题

    从词汇角度来说,这道题目不难理解;从话题角度分析,题目主干为 live longer 活得久,涉及到社会类老年人话题,还是有些难度。

    这里还需注意的是提问方式,问及的是问题,而非原因,不要看错;除此之外也要注意是针对个人和社会的问题,两方面都需要涉及。

    问题分析完毕后,再写相关的解决措施。

     

     

    构 思

     对于人 

    1.健康问题-人年纪越大,越容易遭受疾病(suffer from health problems, especially chronic health problems such as diabetes and back pain)

    2.经济压力-没有工作没有收入,只能依赖养老金。但是物价不断上涨(rising prices of items including food and other household goods )增加了生活成本(push the cost of living up),养老金收入跟不上脚步(fail to keep pace)

     

     对于社会 

    1.导致政府经济压力-老年人寿命变长-政府需要支付更多的养老金(pension)

    2.资源压力-医疗资源压力(put pressure on public resources, especially medical resources)-正如所提及年纪越大越容易生病,一生病需要治疗。

     

    措施部分留给大家自行思考~

     

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    参 考 范 文

    These days, many elderly people are living longer into their retirement. The following essay will discuss the associated problems that arise with this trend, and possible solutions to alleviate any serious impacts it is causing.

     

    There are several problems that may arise when elderly people live longer after they retire. Firstly, a larger portion of old people living longer will have an adverse impact on the economy of a country. In other words, it leads to fiscal shortage. It is a fact that people who are retired require financial assistance from the government to sustain themselves for the course of their retirement. The longer people live, the more pension governments have to pay for and finally the more restricted national budget is. Secondly, as people get older, they have to encounter the financial problem. Although they will receive the pension monthly, their wages fail to keep pace with the inflation. Due to the dire economic situation, rising prices of items including food and other household goods pushes the cost of living up. Old people who have limited pensions hardly afford the increasing living expenses.

     

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    Accordingly, there are several solutions that can be implemented in order to help deal with such issues. These days, in many developed countries, employers are required to make financial contributions to retirement funds on behalf of their employees. These funds help to sustain elderly people throughout their retirement without placing a burden on government budgets. Furthermore, if people are living longer after retirement, then it may mean that they are healthy enough to continue working longer and that governments can increase the retirement age, or allow partial pension payments so that the elderly can continue working part-time if they choose.

     

    In conclusion, although people are living longer after retirement nowadays, there are several solutions that can be implemented to reduce the impacts that this trend is having on the economy.

     


     

    今天的分享就到这里啦,希望这篇题目的解析能让你有所收获,我们下次再见 bye for now~

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