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    近期雅思写作分析!

    摘要  

     又一次考到report?

     相信很多同学在备考雅思写作时都会没有头绪。要不要多背单词?考前写几篇作文比较好?写作时间不够用怎么办?

    本期我们来关注一下近期的雅思写作题目,为大家解答答题思路,正在准备雅思写作的同学们看过来~

     

    考试题目

    During holidays and weekends, young people spend less time on outdoor activities in natural environment, such as hiking and mountain climbing. Why? What can be done to encourage them to go out? 

    考试时看到作文题目应该做些什么?

     

    STEP1.审题

    因为写作是考试最后一个环节,为了保持头脑清醒,我们首先自问自答环节

    问:首先看到题目我们关注一下它的任务什么?

    答:Why? What can be done to encourage them to go out? 所以在问cause and solution.

    问:这次写作题目中,现象是什么?涉及对象有谁?

    答:现象(young people spend less time on outdoor activities during holidays and weekends.)

    涉及对象(young people)

     

    Step.2 思考理由

    请阅读并总结理由:

     

    网络和电脑游戏的吸引力

    Internet and video games are extremely

    accessible and addictive.

    来自学术学习的压力

    Pressures for success and doing well in school and the increasing load of homework.

    工作没时间

    After they finish with school, they take a job that requires even more of their time.

     

    Step.3 思考解决办法

    如何让年轻人走向户外,走向自然环境呢?大家一起来思路拓展吧!

     

    解决办法:

    词组:

    将户外活动纳入课堂

    integrate the outdoors into school curricula

    父母鼓励户外活动

    parents should push their children to experience the outdoors

    父母组织活动

    host family-oriented first-time outing

     

    Step.4 组织文章

    接下来老师来提供一个可能的回答,仅供参考哦:

    One possible sample:

    P1. It is perceived that an increasing number of young people, especially urban youth, feel reluctant to participate outdoor activities in their leisure time. This essay will be focusing on the top barriers for youth to get outdoors in the natural environment and the ways of re-branding the outdoors so that the young are more willing to be outsiders than insiders.

    P2. Among the factors contributing to the issue mentioned above, the easy accessibility and instant gratification of TV and video games is the major reason for not spending time outside. Being obsessed with the internet, cable TV, and computer games, young people are not even conscious of how the precious time slips away, and thus it is quite difficult for the young to distance themselves from this type of non-active influence. In addition, between school and part-time jobs, spending time outdoors becomes little more than an afterthought in young people’s daily life, as they have already been preoccupied by multiple tasks and tight deadlines. In the long term, this pressure-filled environment leads to a skewed perception of how valuable time is spent: they get accustomed to seating in libraries instead of coasting down a river, camping under the stars, or going scuba diving.

    P3. To make outdoors more culturally relevant, inclusive and attractive to the young, teachers and schools have a crucial role to play. Successful cases in Finland indicate the need for creatively integrating the outdoors into school curricula, for instance, walking in the forest during PE class and visiting wetland areas in a Biology course. Furthermore, what parents should do is to push their children to experience the outdoors and host family-oriented first-time outing. In contrast, if the young grow up in families that discourage outdoor activities, then opportunity for them to explore the nature is nullified. (290)

    P4. 请读读上文做出你的总结吧,可以尝试使用这些短语: 

    parental restriction; outdoor activities should be built into education

    In summary …… 

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