首先，大家先自己花几分钟时间来看看以下这几个作文常用句子，思考下每道题目的语法错误。

 

1. When he was 22 years old, he build his own company.

2. Often do sports can improve people's confidence.

3. Doing sports improves students' physical and mental health, it can also improve their study efficiency.

4. Young people experience some difficulties is beneficial.

5. Many students attending university to increase knowledge and skills.

6. The apps that are installed on this smartphone is very useful.

7. Before a person accepts a job offer, you must seriously consider whether you are truly interested in it.

8. There are many people regard earning money as more important than spending time with family.

9. He has devoted his life to help disabled people.

 

接着，带大家一起来分析一下这几道题目。

 

1. When he was 22 years old, he build his own company.

这个句子经常被用在例子里面，大家很容易忽略主句和从句之间的一个时态一致问题，既然是当他22岁的时候，那么主句部分应该用built过去式。

#这道题也同时提醒大家，要对自己的谓语动词的时态和单复数负责，不要随意用#

 

2. Often do sports can improve people's confidence.

很多同学喜欢放这句话在主题句里，这的确是简洁明了，但是开头第一句话就错，让人看了也很是尴尬，分分钟暴露着自己的语法弱点。切记，主语不能是动词或者动词短语，把动词变成动名词使用，是一个比较简便地改法。do sports-》doing sports

#improve one's confidence 可以积累#

 

3. Doing sports improves students' physical and mental health, it can also improve their study efficiency.

有些同学为了让自己文章看起来逼格高一些，很不舍得使用句号，一般都是一逗到底，其实这个就导致了连接词缺乏。所以当两句完整的句子出现的时候，不要不舍得，一定要想想前后的逻辑关系，然后再给出合理的连接词，来加强句子与句子之间的逻辑。这不但避免了语法错误，也加强了句内的逻辑，何乐而不为？

#it前面加上and，然后把这句话背下来，作为素材积累#

 

4. Young people experience some difficulties is beneficial.

找出主语部分，发现是一个句子，所以可以加that变成主语从句，That young people experience some difficulties is beneficial.或者，变动名词 Experiencing some difficulties is beneficial to young people. 但是考虑到主语太长直接改成 It is beneficial for students to experience some difficulties.

#有时候觉得句子比较单一，那么可以通过这种方式来变化句式#

 

5. Many students attending university to increase knowledge and skills.

这句话典型地缺乏谓语动词，错把动名词当作了谓语动词来使用，导致这句话结构不完整。

#把attending 改成attend，attend university 这个词组可以替换go to university#

 

6. The apps that are installed on this smartphone is very useful.

能使用定语从句固然是好事，但是在写的同时大家一定要注意主句部分的谓语动词或者系动词一定要跟主语的单复数保持一致。

The apps （that are installed on this smartphone） is very useful. 括号一加，很明显错误就出现了。所以自己写从句的时候要时刻提高警惕，避免这种错误。

#这句话其实也可以把从句改成过去分词->The apps installed on this smartphone are very useful. 来增加句式表达的多样性#

 

7. Before a person accepts a job offer, you must seriously consider whether you are truly interested in it.

前后人称不一致，这个问题同学们太容易犯了，而且写完通读一遍修改的时候也经常忽略这个问题。

#Before a person accepts a job offer, she/he must seriously consider whether she/he is truly interested in it.#

 

8. There are many people regard earning money as more important than spending time with family.

There be 句型已经出现了一个be动词，如果后面再出现一个动词的时候一般有两种改法：

①There are many people who regard earning money as more important than spending time with family.

②There are many people regarding earning money as more important than spending time with family.

 

9. He has devoted his life to help disabled people.

固定搭配问题devote sth／oneself to doing sth.

#类似的有make a contribution to doing sth, pay attention to doing sth, object to doing sth等等，用的时候有疑惑就及时查字典或者询问老师，避免错误一直存在。平时积累语料的时候也要注重搭配，不可随意替换，有时候替换不当就导致语法错误 #

 

 

以上提到的几个语法错误是同学们前进道路中的大绊脚石，但是对于要获取6分的同学来说，除去这块绊脚石以后，还需要挪动提高逻辑，充实内容，词组积累，表达多样化等石头，写作是一个积累的过程，一定要做到脚踏实地，方可获得提升！加油！